Natural Born Writer – The Telling Trait
There is one immovable, immutable, indelible trait that all natural born writers share. In times of deepest stress or incredible joy, we write in our heads. Despite the entire world collapsing a writer cannot help but observe details that will make the story live on.
Natural born writers catalog sensory data. They store emotional reactions and poignant bits of dialogue as events unfold around them. This happens out of no conscious effort on the writer’s part. It just happens. No matter how nightmarish the experience, no matter how spiritually elevating, how tender, or loving, or awe-inspiring, no matter how devastating or painful – writers record story details.
You, who are writers, think back to an early memory. Delve for an experience when you were five or six years of age. It’s all there, isn’t it? The scent of oil and pine as the Christmas tree dries under the hot blinking lights. A taffeta dress and tulle slip scratching your legs as you climb up on Santa’s lap. You remember staring at this fat stranger in red, wondering why your mother is so insistent that Santa Claus is real when clearly his beard is fake. One good pull and…
Now, try recalling a traumatic event. I’ll use my mother dying in the hospital as an example. I was thirteen.
I still remember the blue veins pulsing in her too thin wrists as I sat beside her bed. Nor can I forget the cloying smell of medicinal sweat that permeated the hospital despite the biting ammonia with which they mopped the tile floors everyday. And meatloaf. Why is it hospitals must always stink of meatloaf and medicine?
My mother’s eyes were as faded as the afternoon sky as she turned to me on that last afternoon, both of us knowing she would not be there for my first kiss or my first broken heart. She looked so desperate to say all the things a mother wants to tell her daughter.
What last words, I wondered, would she find amidst the fog of pain and drugs? Speech battled with the morphine. Morphine won. It clouded her eyes and rendered her sightless. My mother reached for me, scrabbling for my hand like a frightened child, terrified of the tigers that inhabited the pale yellow wall across from her bed.
That’s how, at thirteen, that scene etched itself in my head. Because of that experience, and others, I know how to write a death scene.
Stress is not your enemy. If you are a natural born writer every trauma is being recorded for future use. Every major event in your life is subject to the scrutiny of your writer’s mind scouring it for story riches.
Here’s the flip side of this coin. Here comes the golden nugget of this article, because if you are a writer you already knew everything I just said, didn’t you?
The real payoff is this: when you are facing painful stressors in life, death, suffering, divorce, illness - WRITE. You are writing anyway – in your head. Snatch fifteen minutes between meeting with your lawyer or the funeral director and write. Or even if you simply can’t do that, know you are writing in your head. It keeps writers sane amidst insanity. It’s how natural born writers make sense of their world.
The worst thing that could happen to a writer is too placid an existence. The richest material, the most gratifying lines you will ever write are born from your deepest traumas and your most extraordinary joys.





December 27th, 2011 at 12:09 am
My life took an entirely different turn. For me, very-early childhood sexual abuse robbed me of my memory completely, leaving me nearly numb emotionally until I was in my 40s. Writing poetry in high school was perhaps my first attempt at writing and was more an expression of repressed emotion than actual experience. Like the feelings had been recorded and were desperate to escape. Writing songs makes poetry writing an exercise in precision and a challenge to achieve excellence with words.
For me, to write takes conscious effort, permission, if you will, for my psyche to express itself and take flight. It’s WORK! Hard work. And I like to write non-fiction better than fiction. A fictional story appearing in my mind is a shock!
Reading is escape for me. It refreshes and destresses me. How cool that I can write off the time and expense! I read a lot, more when I’m stressed, though it’s tough to carve out the time sometimes when I need it the most.
I write perhaps because I’m always trying to improve things–I’ve got a critical spirit, I guess. I like to find a better way to do things, so I think I’m a better editor than a writer. But, I’m also a teacher and I love helping people understand difficult concepts and ideas. And I love being able to influence others with the incredible power of words. A natural-born writer? I don’t think that hat fits me very well.
December 27th, 2011 at 12:27 am
That had to be so incredibly difficult, for you, Susan. It grieves me. Things like that should never happen to children.
Yet, it was through your writing poetry that you began to express and reconnect with your emotions.
And music – I often wonder about the connection between music and the psyche. Music is so intensely emotional and yet it frees us from direct confrontation with words (labeling the emotions). It plays straight to our emotions and yet is also amazingly mathematical.
A whole ‘nuther topic which you and I will have to discuss over lunch someday.
December 27th, 2011 at 10:28 am
Wow, Kat! It really makes you stop and think about how we as writers do tend to compartmentalize and categorize everything in our brains without realizing it, to access later in life when those things are needed. We use our senses to bring a depth of reality to our stories, playing with the sights, sounds, and emotions to make every single sentence as real as possible.
Wonderful, thought-provoking subject. Thanks for writing it.
December 27th, 2011 at 10:50 am
boy is this food for thought
I have to admit, many a moment in my stories has somehow been adapted from a true life situation. Whether mine or someone I know – the memory is locked inside and slips out at unexpected moments when penning a story.
I first noticed this when describing the stepmother in my first book. She had this plastic smile at all times, I could only think to describe it as appearing to have been surgically applied. With every word I pictured my Uncles second, and younger, wife sitting across the room from my mother and me. Legs crossed, grin in place, even when she spoke- LOL – every flick of her sandal was described from memory-
I guess that puts me in the camp that natural born writers draw from every situation around them, present and past, and perhaps even the aniticipation of the future.
Is that enough to be crowned, natural born writer, I don’t know. But certainly something worth considering.
I guess I’m still in the camp that considers the ability to instinctively string two interesting sentences together a basic requirement to be considered a natural born author.
December 27th, 2011 at 11:52 am
Hi, Kathleen: I usually close my eyes and picture the scene. What is in the room? How to the characters move? I will embody a character and really feel how she feels and thinks. Sounds weird, I know, but that is what works for me.
December 27th, 2011 at 1:39 pm
See. That’s the skill I think is so vital to writing – you remembered such rich details. That, like you were saying at the party, can’t be taught. I think skills can be learned but this penchant for seeing the unique details is an essential trait.
December 27th, 2011 at 4:41 pm
Hi Vicki! Well, whatever you’re doing it works! You know how well I love your stories. Especially the one in Lavender Dreams.
December 27th, 2011 at 10:15 pm
I never thought about how I write in my head, but you’re so right. As far back as I can remember I would play things in my mind, and when someone said something, I’d add “He said, annoyed” or whatever was appropriate.
December 28th, 2011 at 10:48 pm
Wow, Kat! Cool blog, and you’re so right! I always think I have the worst memory in the world, but when I think about times that were extremely difficult, or delightful and joyous, it’s like I go back in time and I’m right there. I can’t wait to ask Ethan if this is true for him, too.
December 29th, 2011 at 2:10 pm
Hi Rae-Dawn!
Yep, right there! Oh, I’ll just bet Ethan does it, too. He’s an artist and we already know he notices details because of that. Tell him hi!